A Closed Door
Part 1 is here.
I heard a faint scream. It took me a few seconds to realize that it’s mine. My heart raced rapidly; I’ve never been this nervous before, and probably, I will never be again. I hastened my pace towards the door I entered before being “trapped” inside this place. “I can reach it, I can,” I said to encourage myself. I was about three steps short to reaching the entrance when a gust of wind emerged from the outside. It forced the door to close. I punched the door, half expecting that I would open it and finally get out. A tear fell from my eyes when I realized that punching the door would do me no good. When I tried to turn around, I felt a cold aura on my left shoulder. I hesitated for a moment. Then, after mustering all the strength that’s left in me, I turned around. What I saw is hard to explain. She – yes she - might be a phantom. A ghost. An evil creature. But her appearance was not necessarily important for what she said had far greater value. Her lips materialized into a small smile. “We meet again,” she said.
To be continued.
damn good. your work right? moore! hahaha! mooore! =]. suure rob. i’ll help you. :3
tanong ko lang men, pano mo nagawa yang sa co.cc? na kapag nag click sa isang topic e detalyado tulad neto
http://robnuguid.co.cc/2009/08/voices-ii/#comments
kc usually, pag may co.cc ka, kahit san magpunta, laging ganun lang,
kunwari emjozar.co.cc, kahit san ka magclick kahit tapoc, ganun lang lagi, di nagbabago.. haha
pano ba yan? thanks men…
ayt, linked you too.. i also sent you an invitation in facebook..
hope you accept..:)
dazzling words.. keep it up..
Oh i love it! I love reading stuffs like this. I hope to read the next part soon. Do tell me when it’s posted already.
Wow you seriously wrote that? That’s amazing! This might sound weird but as I was reading it, it felt like it was happening to me… that I was in the story lol. Gosh, I’m weird.
That was awesome though, I enjoyed it! Keep it up. =D
nc blog…can you teach me how to use .co.cc domain if i am using wordpress.org hosted blog.. thanks
Hi Rob,
Ang galing mo magsulat pare.. Ang intense ng build-up. I also read the first part. It felt really exciting, and it left us wanting for more..
I have a friend who’ll be able to appreciate your works too.. I’ll send her a link to your blog..
Maybe you want to exchange links with me too..
Keep ‘em coming,
Dick
I just have one last comment:
But it was really good.. Expect me to be back here often.. 
“I fastened my pace towards the door..”
I think you meant hastened. Baka you just mistyped the word lang..
Nice one rob! And i love your pic!
next na! hoho.
Yeah Coldplay are awesome. Thanks, glad you like it.
Why do you want my last name? :S
Nice sequel.
Yup..
And very soon… I will be replaced by one of my friends too.. LOL…
Everything is on a scheduled basis..
a very thanks to you…